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Congrats, man! hope and happiness to you and your soon to be spouse!

Hmm... I really like the message. :)

Your maturity as a storyteller never ceases to amaze me. I definitely think you're moving on to the next round. Not many people can match that level of conveyance and conciseness in imagery. I especially like your usage of color symbolism. Though, for the sake of personal growth, you should probably move away from the limited pallet next round.

Pahgawk responds:

Yeah, I agree. It even starts to feel boring as I'm making it, and when I feel bored with what I'm making it never turns out as well, so I'll be switching it up to keep it fresh at the very least.

That was actually really good, considering it was made in only 48 hours. It's a fresh, unique idea. Just out of curiousity, do you do any work in 3D animation?

JacobStreilein responds:

We are learning maya in school but I havent done anything besides class assignments with it yet.

This is a good step forward, my friend. I'm in agreement with Twisted4000, you know what you're doing for the most part. it's just a matter of pushing yourself a bit harder to get every last drop of entertainment out of your script.
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And also, I and other members of newgrounds really enjoy it when something clean AND funny makes it to the front page. Don't ever change that.

Overall, very good. I like that you kept things appropriate(there's just too much garbage on NG nowadays). Your character designs are very complex, and the colors are very appealing to the eye.

However, your storytelling skills fall very flat. I'm not so sure I understand what just happened, actually. I didn't see much of a storyline, much exposition, climax, or resolution. For instance, why was that guy trying to take over(...rob?) that store. What's the relationship between the antagonist and the protagonists? I suppose I have to give you leeway, since a lot of the plot holes seemed to have been intentional. Although, it didn't seem to have that comedic effect you were looking for.

Please, don't think that I'm hating on you. Certainly not, I'd just like to see a story more fitting of your level of artistic ability.

Twisted4000 responds:

Yeh plot holes were intentional. I was attempting to go for some anime-mocking thing, like in some episode nothing's really explained but the characters happen to have some previous relationship and conflict and

No but seriously that's a good review. I don't entirely agree with how the plot holes aren't funny, since that's more of a biased thing as opposed to a fact, but I see what you're saying.

This better be a part of Portal History 2012. No joke, man. The best thikng I've seen since alight.

Anyone else notice the Police Call Box in the background while they were getting chased?

I agree with dark dude. You really shouldn't rate your stuff as 'E' if you drop the F-Bomb in it.
It's considered explicit audio.

Fix the language issue, or warn us ahead of time, please. Elsewise I would've given you a full five stars. :)

Another great little submission, man. i just can't stop watching these things. I'll have to send a few to my nieces and nephews. they aught to love 'em!

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