TravelSizedLions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragon Farts]

Glad I stopped by the portal today. This was an absolute gem.

ExtraLongLunch responds:

Appreciate it!! Always nice to have a stumble find

[The Missouris: Episode 1]

I like the character and environment design, as well as the choice of music! You've done a great job of conveying a sense of grit and grey with your world.

frougmane responds:

ty<3

[motion graphics presentation]

Slick. I like it, for what it is.

You've got a spelling error, fyi. "slimer" should be "slimmer"

Octavyan responds:

damn i ll fix it when i get back to it to add some music

[in normal stick figure fashion]

Good stuff, man. More specifically, I like the subtle details in hand and foot movements.

One suggestion for the next piece of this: I'd love to see some dramatic camera movement to sell the action.

If you're not already familiar, CS Animate has built-in camera tools:
https://helpx.adobe.com/animate/using/working-with-camera-in-animate.html

But, if you're using an older version of flash, you can get a similar effect by taking your entire scene, then dumping it into a symbol and tweening it around.

skact responds:

oh snap thanks!

[you're waiting too?]

Ooh, does this mean you're working on something bigger that's coming out soon?

skact responds:

even better! i'll be making a lot of dump animations to show what i got and soon make a series, IF it works out, not a web series tho, just a regular short series

[SHOES]

So much for seeing that soda again. Or her shoes for that matter.

The humor for this is understated, but witty. I'm not typically a fan of the analog horror aesthetic, but I think it really works here. :)

JPSantoroArt responds:

Glad you enjoyed! And thank you for leaving a comment!

[Cool Family - Animatic]

I like the concept! And your comedic timing's pretty good, even just from an animatic. I'd love to see this get fully made.

Eno-Spi responds:

Hey thanks, this was originally intended to be a storyboard portfolio piece, I might consider actually making it now.

[Gobble]

Just look at that big doofy smile. Nice character design.

skact responds:

thanks! although it is old, i'll make sure to get back to making design like that

[Hobo Mario Gets a Mushroom]

I like it! I like the fact that you put effort into choosing different camera angles, even for something short like this. I'd love to see you make something longer!

Ndog3856 responds:

Thanks, man! I did have plans on making more, but I'm not sure if they'll be so much longer, but I'll try :)

[Crustaceans]

This is such a trip. Only on NG can you find stuff like this, lol.

Jenital responds:

Awwww yeeeeaaaaahhhh